Saturday, January 9, 2010

TURN A BLIND EYE

The crime committed
Unusually detestable and
Remorseless and was
Noxiously been done


Although so tragic


Bothersome and truly
Loathsome to victims
Instead authorities did
Never try any
Decisive efforts to


Execute the full
Yet reasonably fair
Execution of laws




20 comments:

shadowplay1 said...

Amazing that you could get all this into the acrostic.

You really nailed it!

Amity said...

Hi...

I was looking for your name, how am gonna call you, instead of just Shadowplay...hope I was not mistaken..

April? Please tell me if I can call you April...:)

thanks for your kind comments on my work!

have a great weekend!

yours,

Amity

Meow said...

Is this inspired by incident about which I wrote in my blog.. cuz I see traces of it here Amity :)

Amity said...

Hello Miya;

yeah, it is...have you read my comment there? that authorities turned a blind eye on the incident?

that inspired me to write one like this...:)

Thanks Miya...:) Hugs dear!

Yellow Tulip said...

very good one dear:)...sounds like our politics meddlin!!

anupama said...

Dear Amity,
NAMASTE!
Very well written,dear friend.we do turn a blind eye to many injustice and cruelties of the society.
A good step,dear.
Wishing you a wonderful holiday.enjoy,get relaxed and be happy.I will be also leaving for Kerala to attend my niece's marriage.
wishing you a beautiful weekend,
Sasneham,
Anu

Amity said...

Yellow Tulippy;

...yeah it is....!

thanks dear!

Mads... said...

aww..Amityy..u r able 2 draw the complete meaning..so nicely written..
gr8 job.!

Saras said...

Beautiful Acrostic, Nicely kissed.

DayDreamer said...

Great Creation Amity.. This is perfectly explained..

:-)

Amity said...

Hi Anu;

Thank you so much...and have a great time with your stay at Kerala...:)

Amity said...

Dev;

thanks to you...why not try acrostic writing? it's fun!

Amity said...

Saras;

thanks a lot!

:)

Amity said...

Hi Madhu;

Thanks a lot dear...:)

How about you, done with it? Am afraid not yet!

Let your brain work...see you at AO, seri?

:)

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Amity said...

Saras;

yeah, i just came from your blog this pm...:)

the new skin is reader-friendly, earth color...:)

but ur profile pic is not quite blogger-friendly!

freelancer said...

bang on target....this one will be challenging... :)

DayDreamer said...

Hey Amity ..Dunno I've never tried it..

Guess it requires lot of imagination and stability of mind..

N my imagination is totally based on observations.. and I cannot concentrate on a single thing..Basically I am Day Dreamer..I would sit at one place..and dream about someplace else..

But definitely I would love to give it a shot..

Amity said...

Freelancer;

Of course you write so well,, too, like a bang!!!!

Peace!

Goodluck to both of us!

Amity said...

Hey Dev;

I am a dreamer too, don't you know? But once my mind starts working, you cannot abate the flow of ideas....he he he...nope, just kidding...:)

Don't you know that "once a writer, always a writer?"

Ha ha ha...i am just encouraging you to let ur brains work, bec. it's really fun doing it you know!

Good morning!!!

Yours,

Sis Amity