Tuesday, January 5, 2010

REALITY

Resiliently face
Each challenges
Amidst chaos
Life really
Is struggle
To make
You better

Written for Amias' Acrostic Only

33 comments:

tasmith1122 said...

Amity,
Thanks for the visit. Glad you liked the cat haiku. My oldest and noisiest cat snuck in the house this morning and is trying to help me type right now. She really loves the petting and is always willing to take a joint nap. I would love to try an acrostic or two. Look for it in the next day or two. You know, you can always celebrate the holidays in your heart anytime. One does not have to wait for a certain day of the year.

Yousei Hime

Amity said...

Yousei;

Thanks so much!

And am glad you're willing to try one...I'd be your first follower, promise!

Holidays? Yeah, I mean, in spite of the flu, I can't take a holiday coz' am back to work...:)

Good luck to your first try!

Link it at Acrostic Only and email the same to Amias...:)

See you there!

Amity

tasmith1122 said...

Amity,
Oh no, you have the flu? I've got a cold, and that's bad enough
You are most welcome for the acrostic. I didn't write it for the contest. I wrote it simply because you suggested I try it and to honor our blogging/poetry acquaintence. I'll check out the rules for the future. Feel free to copy this acrostic and do what you like with it--it is all yours.

Yousei Hime

tasmith1122 said...

Amity,
Here is a link to my other blog (which I am very behind on) http://www.closerlookbmg.blogspot.com/. It has more info. As far as the journals go, I’ll just say I was a girl in love trying to please a guy. I have regretted throwing them away ever since. I married the guy (he’s great), and he’s apologized for his part in the loss. Still, it was my foolish decision. If I had a better memory, it wouldn’t be so bad. On the bright side, I’m forced to dredge through my memories, digging deep, to recall things, and I have to write new and better things. Believe me, they are better.

Yousei Hime

tasmith1122 said...

Amity,
I have a surprise for you. You are wrong. I'm older. Last birthday (November) I was 46. (giggling)

Yousei Hime

Amity said...

Yousei,

Thanks for sharing a part of you...:)

Now you can call me Big Sis I would just guess I am older than you!

And I like your wonderful perspective in life...Great!

Yours,

Amity

Amity said...

Yousei;

You are my Big Sis!

Great to be part of you...you are so intelligent and an awesome blogging friend!

I know I will learn a lot from you!

Cheers to a new friendship!

Yellow Tulip said...

nice write :)..its truly a struggle

stardust said...

Wow its so simple yet so true :)
Lovely acrostic :)

Lena said...

Nice template here :)
And i like the poem, it has a strong message just in a few words!

DayDreamer said...

The simplicity of your posts makes it a standout..amongst others..

Great Work..

:-)

Mads... said...

Amityy..dat is indeed a reality...vry well said dear..hugs..:)

Coupon Clippin' Mommy said...

I'm following from MBC. Come check my blog out when you get a chance!

http://www.couponclippinmommy.blogspot.com/

Amity said...

Hi Stardust;

...how are you now?

thanks so much dear!

good morning!

:)

Amity said...

Hi Yellow Tulippy;

good morning...:)

thanks so much, and it really is!

:)

Amity said...

Lena;

wow...you're here, glad you visited, we only elbow with each other at FB...:)

thanks dear for your kind comments on my work...:) brb and read your latest post, "I always fall in love with your lovey-dovey write-ups", you know!

HUgs!

Amity said...

Dev;

You're not a soothsayer huh! But If I win again, then you would be like Yousei, who unknowingly predicted my success last month at AO...:)

Thanks Dev...;)

Amity said...

Coupon Clippin' Mom;

yeah sure...and thanks for droppin by my place!

good morning and i'll be there in due time!

Amity said...

Mads;

thanks dear, hugs to you, too! seen some posts of yours already at AO. I'll bloghop soon...:)

good morning!

KParthasarathi said...

Very true and beautifully said

tasmith1122 said...

Amity,
I wrote the haiku acrostic with you in mind. Glad you like it. Hope it makes sense as an instruction on writing haiku.

Yousei Hime

Amias said...

You know you are right, the reality of life being a struggle is something no one can miss seeing or understanding, many by experiences.

Amity said...

KP;

Thanks so much, and I do speak from my own experiences...

Good day KP!

Amity said...

Amias;

Yes, isn't it BIg Sis!

Thanks so much for your kind comments!

Hugs Big Sis!

Amity said...

Yousei,

Thanks so much. NOw you are starting to teach me the basic of haiku poetry, soon, very soon, I will try one...:)

Amity

HaRy!! said...

hey Amityyyyyyyy spellbound....... sure Reality drives us to do better!!!

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

lovely acrostic...

i love it...

Amity said...

Dear Shrads;

...thanks so much...I've missed you here...including from a couple of tags..:)

How's your new template now?

good evening there!

Amity said...

Hello HaRy;

good morning...thanks!

I've tagged u...quite busy?

:)

Life, Uncharted. said...

Very inspiring. Perseverance is key. Good job on the prompt :)

Amity said...

Hello Sharla;

...thank you so much dear!

:)

Missy said...

Amen sister, you caught this Acrostic square in the gullet. Nicely said.

Amity said...

Missy;

..wow...really? how could i thank you!

am just inspired dear!