All Acrostics: FACES

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

FACES

Facing a large noisy crowd
And started to sing loud
Catching his breath in high tones
Err he missed the right notes
So his audience booed aloud

Written for Amias' Acrostic Only

19 comments:

An Ordinary Gal said...: ohh good... :); January 12, 2010 at 4:17 PM
DayDreamer said...: Good Work Amity..

Try finding me on FB using my e-mail id..

dev.taurus@gmail.com

Cheers,,
Dev; January 12, 2010 at 5:00 PM
Melissa aka Equidae said...: good one :) wish you a great day; January 12, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Mads... said...: heyy..so simple nd luvly wrds..nw u hav mastered the art..gr8 going dear..!!!; January 12, 2010 at 7:43 PM
freelancer said...: this is a nice one...but the sylabble count is all wrong for a limerick dear; January 12, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Amity said...: Dev;

done Dev...:)

thanks!; January 12, 2010 at 8:29 PM
Amity said...: Hi Ordinary Gal;

thanks so much!; January 12, 2010 at 8:29 PM
Amity said...: Melissa;

thanks dear and wish you the same...:); January 12, 2010 at 8:33 PM
Amity said...: Mads;

thanks sweetie, but not so much...and here FL found out some errors in the syllable count, he he he....but I rectified it al...need to be thankful to FL...was confused with the syllable count...:)

g'nayt...:) Hugs!; January 12, 2010 at 8:35 PM
Amity said...: HI FL;

yeah, thanks a lot for the observation, done the needed correction, he he he...:)

now, find out if i got the right syllable count now...!; January 12, 2010 at 8:36 PM
(¯`•._.•[Raajii]•._.•´¯) said...: ahh... interesting :-); January 13, 2010 at 4:23 AM
Saras said...: Very bicely done Amity. Good job.; January 13, 2010 at 5:53 AM
Amity said...: Hi Saras;

thanks a lot...:)

good morning!; January 13, 2010 at 7:04 AM
Amity said...: Hello Raaji

thanks so much dear!

Good morning here...:); January 13, 2010 at 7:04 AM
freelancer said...: hey amity dear...
u still didnt correct the second line :)

it still has 6 syllables

atleast one less than the norm :); January 13, 2010 at 10:55 PM
Amity said...: oh really?

should i be consistent with the syllable count from first to 5th line?

thanks FL...you should not be doing this, lest am gonna beat you in here...he he he...:) just kidding...:)

good morning!

I will again do the correction.; January 14, 2010 at 2:12 AM
Amity said...: please count it again FL..it has 7 syllables already...:); January 14, 2010 at 2:13 AM
Amias said...: Nice poem Amity.; January 19, 2010 at 1:48 PM
Amity said...: Amias;

thanks so much!; January 20, 2010 at 3:49 PM