Two hearts meld
Two minds meld
Two souls meld
Nature and man meld
And it’s perfect!
Like a butterfly
That sips the nectar
Of a beautiful flower
Like the waves
That keep breaking
On the seashore
Like the waterfall
That runs down
In the deep abyss
Like the bird
That sings tunes
Pleasant to ears
Like summer
That brings flowers
To beautiful bloom
Like autumn
That makes the trees
Look lifeless
Like spring
That shows the birth
Of a new beginning
Like winter
That hides the beauty
Of the earth
~*~*~*~
Written for One Single Impression
Prompt: Meld
34 comments:
This is excellent...
It was a great read... :)
Thanks Sumit...:-) You find it a great read!!!!
Like Amity
Whose words flow from soul
for all other souls..
Beautiful poem..on 'Meld' Amity.
Yes Amity, it is perfect!
@ Ramesh,
Thanks so very much Ramesh... :-)
Please don't forget to check on the other guests in my blog...your comments add color to the celebration! Thanks again!
@Harshad,
Thanks so much, glad you find it perfect!!!
beauty and love in your words...!!
That was a beautiful imagery for the prompt meld :)
Love the natural way nature so beautifully blends and merges silently to combine!!
Every stanza comes out with the meaning of the word and the feel :)
Great work Amity!!
Amity, what a beautiful poem...it evokes all the beauty of the natural world.
creation is a perfect balance of all things created... it is good to focus on the beauty of earth and life... herd
Grace and beauty meld in this poem seamlessly.Well done Amity
The perfection of nature melding... amazing imagery fill your words.
@ Sandra,
Thanks dear.. :-)
@ Nanka,
Thanks dear...but I was quite hesitant to post it yesterday, seemed I have not written it perfectly,
anyways, that was my best at that time...:-)
Thank you, again for such an encouraging comment!
@ Sue;
Thanks so much... :-)
@ Write Girl;
Thank you dear... :-)))
@Pieceofpie,
Thank you, well said, that too!!!
@ KP,
Thank you so much :-)
@ Reflections;
Thank you so much!!!
Meld is a great theme... infact as I was reading Patanjali's Yoga Sutra (this is the book that gave the world Yoga) where Patanjali says, about yoga as the union of man and the nature... and your first liked itself got me hooked to this meld of your beautiful words and thoughts... thanks for sharing...
(PS: in case you are wondering about Patanjali's yogasutra, you can find that in my featured books at my blog)
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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great effect this one!
love the words you use..
beautiful flow.
Thanks for sharing your poetry with potluck.
Happy Monday.
Wow nature and life at its best...this was a joyfull read amity...lovely...
I really liked the man earth connection in this with out nature and it's strengths we are nothing we depend on the melding of life every day!
@ Shashi;
Thanks to you...yes, and thanks for sharing that book about yoga, I generally know that yoga is a way of communing with self...:-)now I know through you it is the union of man and nature...
Thanks again for coming by...:-)
@ Fiveloaf,
Thanks once again... :-)
You melded this universal truth together quite well ... and it's a most enjoyable to read... Bravo!
I am touched by your words, they are truly amazing and lovely =)
beautifully done~ I LOVE the first stanza- the perfect idea of melding... Great use of the prompt! Oh and love the new background too~
Interesting; a smattering of imagery. Thanks for sharing! Good job.
@ AMias,
Big Sis, thank you so much!!!
Love you... :-)))
So, so lovely.
I like the look of your blog too, gorgeous bamboo.
Excellent expressions!
Excellent expressions!
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