Monday, November 29, 2010


Bitterness hurts like crazy
Rending the heart sorely
Even amends are scanty
Against hurts hurled plenty
Knowing him rather fully
Oblivious to pains scary
Forgetting him is really
Frightfully the only way


Written for Acrostic Only

Also for Leo's Z to A Challenge in 26 Days for the month of November.

B for Breakoff


KParthasarathi said...

Truly said.Where there is no remores and an apology for the hurts hurled,forgetting is the only way.You hv explained breakoff so nicely

Nanka said...

Prefer to "BREAKOFF" than live a whole life of misery!! "Even amends are scanty" and "Oblivious to pains scary" is definitely a warning signal.

Lovely Acrostics and well thought Amity!!

Amity said...

@ KP,

Thanks so much...:-) Yes, it is so!

Amity said...

@ Nanka,

that's so very true...seems like we are a connoisseur of relationships now ha....he he he... :D

Thanks dear!!!

Tweety said...

I agree with nanka amity...better break off than be filled with misery...after all a relation is supposed to give us happineess and peace...

lovely acro...that too with rhymes :-)

ljm (Amias and Liquidplastic) said...

You got that right Amity! Should have divorced my husband two weeks after we married .. instead .... oh well, you read my poetry, so I don't have to go into it here. Good Acrostic!

Sumit Sarkar said...

great acrostics... :)

kavisionz said...

OUCH!! But it's really better to call it off than to drag oneself with it forever!
Excellent acrostic, and superb use of words and rhymes!