Tuesday, February 16, 2010

SISTERHOOD

Salvation for the deprived
Invokes allegiance to tenets
Sufferings of members eased
Testimonies of abuse heard
Every member a family
Rites performed for loyalty
Humaneness must be exemplified
Overcome pride and prejudice
Openness would ease pain
Diffidence must be avoided

22 comments:

The Write Girl said...

Your poem certainly evokes a strong sisterhood. I am inspired by your words.

Hemanth Potluri said...

nice :)..

urs..hemu..

KParthasarathi said...

Superb,Amity.It has come very well.
Have a nice day:)

Leo said...

this is wonderfull.. perfect! u stand a clear chance of winning Amity! :)

Amias said...

Amazing. Indeed it does provoke a strong sense of sisterhood!

Jim said...

I like it, Amity. Yes, it helps when we stick together, especially the sisterhood!

and now,

Happy Birthday Amity!
Happy Birthday Amity!
Happy Birthday Amity!
Happy Birthday Amity!
Happy Birthday Amity!
Happy Birthday Amity!
Happy Birthday Amity!
Happy Birthday Amity!
Happy Birthday Amity!

Happy Birthday to you!

That's the way I sing now since I've been asked not to sing in a church choir. I used to but when we moved the choir director said I had a bad ear and he didn't want me in his choir.
So, Happy Birthday Amity!
and
((((HUGS))))
..

Amity said...

Hello Write Girl;

Thank you so much!!!

Let us join hands and form a sisterhood in the blogworld!

Anya said...

Great words about sisterhood
wonderful written !!!!!!

I see its your birthday today ???
from the comment on the top !!!

I will sing also for you:

♩ ♬ Happy Birthday to you ♪ ♫
♩ ♬ Happy Birthday to you ♪ ♫
♪ ♫ Happy Birthday Dear Amity ♬
♪ ♫ Happy Birthday to you ... ♩ ♬
Yeahhhhh.......

Have a wonderful day ..

Kareltje =^.^=
Anya :-)

Amity said...

Hemu;

thanks to you!

Amity said...

KP;

..thanks to you!!!

Amity said...

Hello Leo;

may your predictions come true!

thank you so much!!!

Amity said...

Amias,

Thank you so much Big Sis! I am so glad you like it!

And thanks for the birthday bash you have for me at Acrostic Only...:)

That made me cry....:)

Amity said...

Jim;

Wow! Thanks for that birthday song, now a child can sing that with ease, too!

I have an edge with you, I sing in a choir in church together with my three kids and hubby! Simply because i can carry a tune!

Have a nice day Jim!

Visit Amias' AO, too on birthday wishes!!!

Amity said...

Hello Anya and Kareltje;

Thank you so much to both of you! Now i wonder how would Kareltje sing that birthday song to me:

Meow, meow, meow, meow, meow, meow...
Meow, meow, meow, meow, meow, meow...
Meow, meow, meow, meow, meow, meow, meow, meow...
Meow, meow, meow, meow, meow, meow...
Dear Amity!

Now Kareltje is superb!

Thanks again dear! Hugs to Kareltje!

Sunakshi said...

Thanks a lot for visit and comments sister. :)

Your comments were worth reading :)

I am going off for sometime because of my exams,see you around in april.i hope to come up with happy posts then. :)

take care. :)

Mads... said...

woww..Amityy..dis has rlly cum out 2 be a perfect one..great dear..such a nice write..!!!
Happy b'day once again..:) how was yr day??

Amity said...

Hi Sunakshi;

Thanks dear!

Okay, take ur time with your exams...and when you will be back, I am just here, your Big Sis, following you!

Good luck and give ur best shot!

God bless!!!

Amity said...

Hi Madhu!

How are you dear?

I spent my bday working... :)
I have to be in office coz' I was to sit as Acting Secretary on a Legislative Session while the Secretary is On Leave of Absence...:)

Then, I went online at FB...bloghopped, and that made my special day!:

Thanks dear, so sweet of you!!!

Tammie Lee said...

this is a powerful poem
may your message be heard
and honored

Happy Birthday Amity!!!

Amity said...

Tammie;

Yes, it is!

Thanks Tammie for the birthday greetings, it surely added more colors to my birthday!

:)

Americanising Desi said...

these are just so beautiful :)

Amity said...

Ad;

thank you so much!