Friday, February 19, 2010

NEW DAWN


Negate heartaches and disappointments
Expel all foolish expectations
With a strong heart

Desperation must end now
And with decisive efforts
Willingly face the future
Nurture hopes to survive

Written for Amias' Acrostic Only

16 comments:

Mads... said...

aww..its so b'ful nd true my dear..gr8 wrk..njoying yr acrostics..nw u seem 2 b a master..:):)

VKT said...

very lovely Amity

Hemanth Potluri said...

:)...

urs..hemu..

Saras said...

Nice one Amity! Hey I haven't seen you for ages. Do visit.

KParthasarathi said...

Why not on a positive note?

New day
Enjoyable experiences
With abundant joy

Delectable dawn
And new outcomes
Warming the heart
Never as before

Anya said...

Different words today
but your lines are great written
as always !!!!

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful :) :) Very Well Said Dear :) :)

Amity said...

Hi VKT;

thanks for visiting me...i am sure you are new here but am happy for your visit!

Thanks once again!

Amity said...

Hello Madhu?

Master, how i wish...but not really, there are others...:)

But am happy for giving me such tag, makes me smile endlessly... :)...:D

Thanks soo mucho!

Amity said...

Hems;

thanks for the :)

:)

Amity said...

Saras;

Thanks, yes, I will!!!

Amity said...

Saras;

Thanks, yes, I will!!!

HaRy!! said...

There is always but HOPE every new morning!! beautiful!!! sorry was outta blogsville for some time

HaRy

anupama said...

Dear Amity,
NAMASTE!
Good Evening!
VERY INSPIRING LINES!
Leaving behind all the negative thoughts,
With a smile I'm moving forward!
Thanks,dear for being my friend,
Who is really inspiring and encouraging!
Wishing you a lovely weekend,
Sasneham,
Anu

Amias said...

There are times when I find our commonalities in writing from the "dark" or "negative" sides of life. As such I understand your comments to my poetry. Positive and negative, one cannot exist without the other. Good attempt.

Amity said...

tHANKS TO hArY, aNUPAMA and Amias!

You are all very supportive to my works on acros!