Thursday, February 25, 2010

COMETS


Corrupted by ancient beliefs
Of our great ancestors
Movement of heavenly bodies
Entering the planet earth
Tells of bad luck
Some wars and pestilences

15 comments:

KParthasarathi said...

Nicely said
Have a great day

Priya Joyce said...

well said.... :)

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

awesomeness...

give me some comment love too....i am hungry after my comment 'fast'

Hemanth Potluri said...

good :)...

urs..hemu..

Saras said...

Good one, Amity

Anya said...

Wonderful words :-)

Have a nice evening !!!

anupama said...

Dear Amity,
NAMASTE!
Good Evening!
Really nice post.I loved it.
Nothing will happen.Praise the Lord!God is great!
Prayers give us peace of mind!
Wishing you a lovely night,
Sasneham,
Anu

(¯`•._.•[Raajii]•._.•´¯) said...

very well :-)

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful Write Up!!!!!!!!!! Very Well Said :) :)

An Ordinary Gal said...

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Amias said...

Very true indeed! Nice acrostic.

Sunakshi said...

Very very nicely done.keep it up :)

Leo said...

a different take this.. quite lovely Amity...

rdl said...

Congrats on your win!!

Amity said...

Thanks to you all for your patience and whole hearted support to my acros, and am happy to let you know, this piece won!