Sunday, February 14, 2010

MY FAMILY

My wish is ideal
Yet quite too impossible

For each passing time
Apparently society affected it
Many times was tested
Its will to survive
Longing for peace throughout
Yearning for true happiness


12 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

True happiness is a challenging quest. That is a wonderful acrostic.

Sunakshi said...

Its awesome sister,you're the best acrostic writer. :)

I'd like to try my hand in it 1ce,kindly give some tips.. :)

take care
-sunakshi

Ellen said...

Lovely! Truly!

Creativity!! said...

Wowww...........Beautiful :) :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

beautiful acro :)...

urs..hemu..

Sunakshi said...

Thanks for the link sister :)

Saras said...

Very original Amity! Well done.

Aniket said...

Pure thoughts and a noble wish. :)

Mads... said...

heyy its rlly pleasant to read u..so well framed..may yr family always remainfilled wid peace nd luvv..:)

anupama said...

Dear Amity,
NAMASTE!
Good Evening!
May God Bless You to lead a happy and peaceful life with family!
Lovely short post!
Thanks a bunch dear for your beautiful and sincere comment on my site.I could feel your love.:)
Be active like before.you are so creative.
Wishing you a lovely and peaceful night,
Sasneham,
Anu

Amias said...

Old and full of foolishness at time, I have learned the hard way that family does not equate to happiness ... there are times when one has to be their own family. For some reason this piece evoked memories of my family that left me bitter ---

Yes, I enjoyed your take on this prompt.

Amity said...

To all of you, my heartfelt thanks...:)

I am nothing without you all!