Subdued they look
Ulterior motive hidden
In misleading demeanors
Craving for extermination
Instant mass slaughter
Dying they thought
Ennobles true heroism
But they're indoctrinated
On false dogmas
Making them sacrifice
Both family, happiness
Even forsaking life
Resenting world order
Seeking total annihilation
Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
20 comments:
That was indeed very intense. I always wondered how people can overstep their instincts for life and commit such an act. Still a wonder for me.
Lena
i still wonder people killing people y does this all happen...:(..
urs..hemu..
Oh wow... That was really good! Great job.
Excellent Write Up Dear :) :D
That was really good. I have a hard time understanding people who would do that. I guess I'm not that dedicated. I'd rather be selfish and live.
Lena;
hey, thanks you're here after a long absence.
yes, indeed, what u said is very true!
Anonymously secret;
Thanks so much!
Hems;
Yes, these people are brainwashed and maybe, was never told they have a soul, too that could perish after this life!
Gavin;
They are some lost souls I guess!
Thanks!
Sahana;
Thanks dear...you write acros very well, too!
Please come to AO now!
:)
Yes,brainwashed to do brainless acts of horror and cruelty.
Nicely written
KP;
Thanks a lot!
You have brought out the misconception and disillusionment of the suicide bomber so well! Excellent Acrostic Amity. Great Job!
Saras;
Thank you so much Saras!
yes.. well brought out.. good...
Perfect Amity! You nailed it perfectly!
Amias;
Thank you so much!
Leo;
Thanks dear!
:))
Excellent poem.
Ofira;
Thanks so much!
Glad ur back at AO...Amias is more than happy!
:)
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