He suffered bruises, pains
In parents' cruel hands
Leading to trauma forever
Destroying his self-worth
And his normal growth
Blighting his bright future
Until he becomes a
Social and family problem
Enslaved by lifetime fear
Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
Photo Courtesy
20 comments:
Fantastic Write Up :) :)
wonderful work Amity!
Sorry about facebook.
I can not concentrate on too many things so i am off facebook for now.
You pretty much hit the nail on the head with this one. Been there and done that.
Touching photo :(
Poor child !!
Touching words ...
~ Fear is only as deep
as the mind allows ~
it was beautifully written for such harsh a subject.... left you an award on my blog
Very well done, Amity.
You painted the picture with your words, but the graphic took it home. Very well done Amity, very well said!
very nicely written, Amity
yeah i agree with Amias..
the pic did it for me.. took me over the edge of sorts.. so damn painful!
Awesome poem, love you word usage and the last line wraps the whole poem up nicely.
Shraddha;
Thanks a lot...:) About FV, it's okAY!
Sahana;
Thanks a lot! Good morning...:))
Gavin;
Oh really, sorry about that!
Thanks so much!
Melissa;
Thanks dear and also for the award!
Anya;
yes dear, what you said is true!
thanks so much!
:)
Vidya;
Thanks dear!
Amias;
Thank you, thank you so much!
Saras;
Thank you!
Ofira;
Thanks so much dear!
:)
Leo;
Thanks a lot, am so glad it really hit you!
:)
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