Monday, December 21, 2009

I LOVE YOU


I know this

Languid heart
Of mine is
Vain of
Expressing how

You complete me coz'
Only you could
Understand me.

Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
Photo Courtesy

18 comments:

Vanessa said...

'You complete me' says everything about love..wonderful expression Amity !

KParthasarathi said...

Beautifully said

Hemanth Potluri said...

awesome :)...

urs..hemu..

anupama said...

Dear Amity,
Good Evening!
lines of love n strong belief!you are lucky to have someone to love you wholeheartedly.
with a clear heart n mind,
wishing you,dear friend,
A Merry Christmas!
Sasneham,
Anu

Anya said...

Touching words :-)
Love is the best feeling there is!!
Lovely written ...

(@^.^@)

roshwrites said...

Brilliant! Nice blog layout btw! :D

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful Dear :) :)

~☆~Marshmallow~☆~ said...

Wonderful!

Amias said...

Good suggestion Leo.

The poem is suppose to be about how you love him, but it's got two different thoughts. To make them work, you should have just said in the first line ..

"I love you"

Then the other stanza would make better sense because you would be telling him/her why?

Amity said...

Vanessa;

thank you so much!

:)

Amity said...

Hems;

yeah? thanks!

:)

Amity said...

KP;

thanks a lot!

Amity said...

Anya;

..can be written in so many ways..."love"...:)

Amity said...

Anu;

we all wish to have this kind of someone who could really love us!

:)

Amity said...

Princes Nuchu:

as wonderful as you are!

*wink*...*wink*!

Amity said...

Creativity;

..thanks a lot dear!

:)

Amity said...

Amias;

and another lesson learned...thank you so much!

:)

Amity said...

Leo;

thanks dear, I gave in to your suggestion, it sounds better really!