Dear Amity, Good Evening! lines of love n strong belief!you are lucky to have someone to love you wholeheartedly. with a clear heart n mind, wishing you,dear friend, A Merry Christmas! Sasneham, Anu
The poem is suppose to be about how you love him, but it's got two different thoughts. To make them work, you should have just said in the first line ..
"I love you"
Then the other stanza would make better sense because you would be telling him/her why?
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'You complete me' says everything about love..wonderful expression Amity !
Beautifully said
awesome :)...
urs..hemu..
Dear Amity,
Good Evening!
lines of love n strong belief!you are lucky to have someone to love you wholeheartedly.
with a clear heart n mind,
wishing you,dear friend,
A Merry Christmas!
Sasneham,
Anu
Touching words :-)
Love is the best feeling there is!!
Lovely written ...
(@^.^@)
Brilliant! Nice blog layout btw! :D
Beautiful Dear :) :)
Wonderful!
Good suggestion Leo.
The poem is suppose to be about how you love him, but it's got two different thoughts. To make them work, you should have just said in the first line ..
"I love you"
Then the other stanza would make better sense because you would be telling him/her why?
Vanessa;
thank you so much!
:)
Hems;
yeah? thanks!
:)
KP;
thanks a lot!
Anya;
..can be written in so many ways..."love"...:)
Anu;
we all wish to have this kind of someone who could really love us!
:)
Princes Nuchu:
as wonderful as you are!
*wink*...*wink*!
Creativity;
..thanks a lot dear!
:)
Amias;
and another lesson learned...thank you so much!
:)
Leo;
thanks dear, I gave in to your suggestion, it sounds better really!
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