Thursday, December 17, 2009

BACK SEAT DRIVER



Behaving like all-knowing
And attempting to be better
Coaxing his unsolicited advice
Keeping the driver confused.

Shoving his fellow passengers
Exalting himself as the best
Attempting his acts could help
Telling everyone as helpless.

Don't you feel irritated?
Regretting, giving him a lift?
In this foolish creature
Villainous and so disgusting
Ever will I pick him
Ridiculous, I would be!

Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
Photo Courtesy

15 comments:

Meow said...

This is interesting.. and you brought the essence of BACK SEAT DRIVE to the point :)

Vanessa said...

Dear Amity,

First things first ! Thank you so much for your visit and for your footprints on my blog..:)

You are very talented and by the evidence of your posts count i would say you are a passionate writer ..I'm glad to meet you here.

Thank you

Saras said...

Wow, you said it perfectly, Good Take.

Anya said...

Hi Amity
Nice to meet you
we love new friends :-)
Very well written
your lines are wonderful !!

Have a nice evening
Anya :-)

Hemanth Potluri said...

me always the front seat guy :)...nicely written amity :)..

urs..hemu..

Snow White said...

nice one amity :)loved it dear :)

PS the Pratsie said...

still going grt :)

Amity said...

Miya;

thanks so much dear!

:)

Amity said...

Vanessa;

thanks a lot, i'm elated with your comments...:)

i firmly believe you are also a talented lot!

so keep on writing and i will be an avid fan of yours!!!

Amity said...

Saras;


...thanks so much!!!

Amity said...

Hello Anya;

of course I do love making friends, too, especially from around the world...:)

thank you so much...:)

Amity said...

Dear Snow White;

..thank you dear!!!

:)

Amity said...

Hemu;

really? so you never act like a back seat ? ever?

:)

Amity said...

Hello Pratsie;

...thanks so much dear!!!

Amias said...

I can not abide a back seat driver, personally I do it from the front seat! LOL.