Friday, November 6, 2009

DONA NOBIS PACEM







GRANT US PEACE

God Almighty
Reach us
A world in chaos
Needing
Total harmony.

Universal pandemonium
Sickening sight.

Peoples of
Every nation
Are victims of
Confusion, anarchy
Endless bedlam.



20 comments:

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

great job!!!

i know how fast you did it..terrific!

Amity said...

Oh really?

thank you, thank you so much....:)

Meow said...

This is so very peaceful madam :) very very sweet :)

DayDreamer said...

Peaceful and wonderful creation!!

:-)

Amity said...

Meow...

thanks dear...:)

Amity said...

Dev:

...sure, it is...:)

Mads... said...

heyy..vry well said dear..yes, we all stand for peace nd harmony, may the almighty grant us..may our words reach him..!!!nicely, prompted with luvly words..keep it up..:)
PS:oh..m seein a new pic n signature too...:)gr8 going dear..nice..:)tc...
luv n hugs..:)

HaRy!! said...

God help us indeed..need our almighty to save the nations of this world!

Life Unchartered said...

You penned this so well Amity. Alot of strong words woven throughout....universal pandemonium. I'm amazed how creatively everyone is taking on this challenge. Thanks for stopping by my humble abode :) Take care.

Amias said...

I could not have said this better. This is very good Amity Me, and the message is so very profound and true!

Amity said...

Hello Maddy,

thanks dear...:)

the new image of signature, that's complements of our dear friend, our fellow poet's choice awardee...:)

have a nice day dear!!!

hugs, too!!!

Amity said...

HaRy;

yes, let us be one in prayers that God will save us from further condemnation!

:)

Amity said...

Hello Amias;

i've missed you...:)

thank you so much...:)

Amity said...

Life Unchartered;

thank you so much also for stoppin' by my site...;)good evening....:)

Amity said...

Leo;

...thank you so much, your rendition of the prompt is also great!

too many minds, too many different interpretations...:)

Yellow Tulip said...

Congrats dear:)...nicely done...surely we do need help nw

Amias said...

Amity Me, your pages are locked. Email me this poem.

Amity said...

Yellow Tulip;

yes it is, thanks dear!

Amity said...

Amias dear,

mailed you already, sorry for the late response, coz it's only now that i opened my mails....

really sorry!

Mimi Lenox said...

What a thought-provoking acrostic.
Thank you for participating in BlogBlast For Peace and flying your globe.

You are #1637 in the official peace globe gallery. It will post February 15, 2010.

http://blogblastforpeace.com